Souls Climax (Monday Poetry Potluck)

This week’s theme is Peace, Relaxation and Spirituality – I picked up my pen and started writing and this is what I created –surely a twist I didn’t expect but I enjoy the way it turned out and I hope you all do as well.

Peaceful are the sounds
of his heart beating against mine
Calming is the current
of his energy when I
can’t calm mine

Relaxing are the
emotional waves
that drive me to
swim to emotional
ecstasy, wanting
to ride the roller
coaster, just 1 more

Spiritually climactic is
knowing your soul
is destined to join
with mine

So peacefully, relaxed
I await the day
we finally meet and
feel compete as
peace relaxes,
our spiritually soars…

Now playing: CeCe Winans – I Surrender All
via FoxyTunes

20 thoughts on “Souls Climax (Monday Poetry Potluck)

  1. The Girl In The Corner says:

    I enjoyed reading this – It makes me feel the relaxed feeling I get when I rest my head on my boyfriends chest and listen to his heart. Simply reading your poem about relaxation, makes me feel relaxed!

    Thank you for sharing, and thank you for visiting mine 🙂

  2. Jingle says:

    Thanks for contributing poetry potluck week 20, support us by visiting and commenting for a dozen poets starting from our latest entries, 201, 200, 199, 198, 197, 196, 195, stop when you feel that you have enough.


  3. Cheryl says:

    “Peaceful are the sounds of his heart beating against mine”

    I love this line because it really expresses that calmness between two heartbeats beating as one. Like your rhythm. Enjoyed this a lot.

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