Attention Deficit

Attention your attention
Has completely forgotten me
Don’t want your pity have no intention
Of playing your games – attention
Your attention has been stolen away from
Me – don’t feel obligated to check up on
Me when you so easily admit…you forgot
All about me – lucidly I do see
All the things passing by that you used
To want from me with me – not emptily
You easily forgot it was attention that I need

64 thoughts on “Attention Deficit

    • Ms. Peaches says:

      yes I’m on it I’ll let you know when I’m done (of course) can’t wait to check out some new folks and re-visit my veteran friends!

  1. Olivia says:

    You certainly have drawn my attention…
    Lovely words, strong emotions- it is just so nice..
    Simply written across poem expressing much stronger sentiments.. I love such ones.. I can so relate to it- the emotion conveyed, and your style of writing.. glad I came across..

    • Ms. Peaches says:

      I guess we’ll see if the attention has been captured by the person intended 🙂 thanks for giving me a read I appreciate your support!

    • Ms. Peaches says:

      Thank you I definitely would like to accept!!! you are so kind!!! sorry to be so late in picking up the awards! I’m getting caught up though~

  2. brokenpenwriter says:

    Woah – powerful stuff! A friend of mine was saying the same thing the other day that she didn’t want birthday presents from her daughter and grandchildren. All she wanted was some TIME. I’m going to show her your poem because in the voice of a younger generation, you have written what was in her heart, and she is in her seventies. You’re good – you write with passion and all the emotions that flow out of your fingers as well as your heart.

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