Resentment I feel for you seriously
Left me with no repeal, your lack of
Actions put me in places called things
Lower than disparity, but you seemingly
Selfishly see no error in thee but in
Time I’ve learned while intentions
May be well thoughtful and sounding
Full of care…one can only be affected if
The action or lack there of is directly
Affecting someone who is all about ME.
are you okay?
hope that everything is fun…
your poem shows that you are unhappy…
I’m good…releasing older bottled up emotions…”getting things off my chest” but I’m back! I’ll be doing some nominating! Yay!
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/19/the-celebrate-poet-of-june-award-plus-poetry-community-award/
I may forget to notify you this,…
more than 100 poets,
it take me time,
..check it out!
😉
well done,
love the way your say it, although it contains some frustrations…
I love this line, especially..
>>> you seemingly
Selfishly see no error in thee
Such power here. Thank you!
a reflection on life. Here’s my belated Pot Luck poem. Hope your week goes well
very true.
Absolutely!! Sometimes, the intentions aren’t meant to hurt.. but if the action does, then it all in vain.. 😦
I really liked the intensity of this poem… you’ve really conveyed your message across!! And very well too!
Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck… we really appreciate your participation